Chapter Six

Friday, 26 March 2010

The free web serial has now been taken down, but you can buy the collected episodes as a novella for the princely sum of 99c from either Smashwords or Amazon for the Kindle!

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Kil Conor said...

So many questions, but I'll hold them a bit. I'm not sure that flies would be found so much underground. I could be mistaken of course.

Walt said...

Guns are loud, very loud. Firing two shots in a sewer would be deafening. I remember making the mistake of firing a 454 Casul (described as a hand cannon) without hearing protection, out in the open, and my ears rang for hours.

That has been the only thing to jump out as me as I read. Aside from that, this serial has been fantastic. I'm a little disappointed that Phillip wasn't eaten by the meat beast. At the end he seemed a little concerned about going back up to the surface. Either he has something to fear up there or he has a job to do back in the underground.

I'm also hoping that Four can be repaired and wasn't completely damaged.

Now for Chapter Seven

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